ext_93609 ([identity profile] ronniekins77.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dragonydreams 2007-07-19 04:26 am (UTC)

Ooh, interesting! I like the start of this. :)

Peter seems to be just the person she needs in this situation, but I love that you don't have him supporting running away (at this point anyway).

And I love that it took Claire awhile to muster the courage to call him. Talking to your hero has got to be a little nervewracking. :)

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