Ooooh, interesting start to the fic. I'm intrigued by the dynamics you've created here, with Amnesiac!Peter/Nathan (which is quite hot BTW, thinking about the Petrellicest happening as two full grown adults instead of developing from years and years of sibling interaction). Also West is just the right side of creepy without being unfairly demonized.
I giggled at Peter's comment though:
"He's a little creepy," Peter said.
Hee! That's the best thing Peter has said all season (and this isn't even part of the show!).
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Date: 11/1/07 11:41 am (UTC)I giggled at Peter's comment though:
"He's a little creepy," Peter said.
Hee! That's the best thing Peter has said all season (and this isn't even part of the show!).